HUMAN TORCH CREATED BY CARL BURGOS

   #12

 

 

 

JANUARY, YEAR 5

 

“Old Time Week!”

 

Written by Jeff Melton

 

WHAT HAS GONE BEFORE: The Human Torch defeated the son of the notorious Fiddler in France. Meanwhile, there have been mysterious appearances of Golden Age heroes, who have been subsequently captured.  

 

In the executive offices of Oracle, Inc., Jim Hammond sits at his desk, trying to sort through a seemingly endless supply of paperwork. He runs his right hand through his hair, as he sifts through the paperwork with his left.

 

“You’d think I could hire an assistant to go through all of this paperwork!” Jim muses silently. “It’s no wonder Namor put me in charge of this company—although why he thought I’d be good at this is beyond me! I thought he was doing me a favor, but this is just one of his ways of getting the last word from all of our feuds.”

 

Just then, his receptionist walks into the office, after a short knock. “Mr. Hammond, sir…,” she offers, holding a small slip of paper in her hand. “I didn’t want to bother you, but you had some visitors downstairs.”

 

“Visitors?” Jim asks, surprised. He looks up at her, and she involuntarily takes a step back, worrying that she did the wrong thing.

 

“I’m sorry, Mr. Hammond,” she says with regret. “I know that you’re a busy man, and I shouldn’t have even bothered you with this. I know you can’t take anyone without an appointment, and I shouldn’t have bothered you with this,” she continues to ramble, as she steps back to the door, not looking back. “It’s just that they have been very persistent and said they’ve known you for---I know this sounds ridiculous, because you’re not that old—but  fifty years. I wasn’t sure what you wanted me to do about it, sir, but I should have just told security to take care of it, and…”

 

“Fifty years?” Jim asks, looking at her, and realizing how nervous she is.

 

“Yes, I know…”she starts.

 

Jim puts his hand up to cut her off. “What are their names?” he asks. “How many of them are there?”

 

“Oh,” she is surprised, not expecting this. She looks down at the list.  “Well, I only have one name, but they’re strangely dressed.”

 

“Strangely dressed?” he asks, looking up at her, becoming more interested in what she has to say. “What do you mean? I think everyone in this city is strangely dressed!”

 

Despite herself, the young receptionist smiles. This is the first time she has ever heard her somber boss make a joke. Being from a small Iowa town, she can relate to what he’s saying. She’s thought it herself. “Well, sir, that’s true,” is all she can manage.

 

“I think I know who they might be,” Jim offers. “Send them on up.”

 

“Okay, sir,” she agrees, and turns to leave, having some measure of difficulty hiding her surprise that he agreed to see these visitors.

 

“Hold on,” Jim says, stopping her at the door. She turns around to face him.

 

“Yes, sir?” she asks, looking at her boss with interest.

 

“Have you looked through all of this mail and paperwork?” he asks.

 

“Oh, no, sir,” she replies sheepishly. “I wouldn’t dare go through your stuff. I just put it on your desk.”

 

“What’s your title, exactly?” Jim asks.

 

“Well, I’m a receptionist,” she replies, not sure where this is going, but  getting nervous once again.

 

“Now, if you were an executive assistant, you’d do things like that right—sort out the mail, make sure that it goes where it’s supposed to go, go through the paperwork and see to it that  these things are handled properly?”

 

“I suppose so, sir,” she responds, still unsure of what he is getting at, but wondering if this is going to be good news or bad news. “I mean, I’d do whatever you told me to do.”

 

“How would you like to be my executive assistant then?” Jim asks bluntly.

 

“Would I…?” she asks, excitedly. “I mean, that would be great, sir.”

 

“Good then,” Jim replies. “As soon as you get my visitors up here, go through this paperwork. You can start right now.”

 

“Oh, okay, sir,” she says, quickly going through the door, smiling broadly as she goes. “And mama said I couldn’t make it in the big city!” she thinks to herself, shaking her head.

 

INTERLUDE

 

Lake Blue Ridge in Fannin County, Georgia sits under the Blue Ridge Mountains. Its beautiful blue water hosts jet skiing and boat rides in the summer. This late in the season, only residents  can be found amid the cool morning air.

 

As the Blue Ridge Mountains rise in the background, two elderly men fish from their boat on Lake Blue Ridge, braving the early morning cold and the wind from the cold January waters. They come here frequently for the relaxation of fishing on the lake, where they can be far away from business—and (if the truth be known) from nagging wives. Today, however, this peace will be disturbed in a way this community has never known.

 

Suddenly, from the middle of the lake, 300 feet from the elderly fishermen’s boat, a costumed figure’s head emerges from the cold blue water. On his head is a fin-shaped mask. He throws his head back, as his head breaks free from the icy water.

 

The figure swims across the water, drawing surprised looks from the fishermen, who cannot understand how a man can suddenly appear—much less swim in such cold water without collapsing from hypothermia. However, if any of this bothers this figure, he makes no sign of it. And, he swims far better than anyone they have ever seen.

 

Noticing the two fishermen in their boat, the figure swims quickly over to their wooden boat, placing his hands on the side of the boat, as the two fishermen look down, stunned.

 

“Where am I?” the figure asks, looking at one of the fishermen. He has white stubble on his face, and is wearing a flannel shirt, with a waterproof parka. The fisherman looks down at him with surprise.

 

“How are you doing that?” the fisherman asks, stunned that the man in the water is not winded—or freezing to death.

 

“Doing what?” the man in the water asks.

 

“You must be one of those super-hero types,” the fisherman comments. “But, you don’t know where you are?”

 

“No, I don’t,” the figure in the water responds.

 

“You’re on Lake Blue Ridge, “ the fisherman responds simply.

 

“The Blue Ridge Mountains?” he asks rhetorically. He brings up his right hand, which brandishes a magical sword, glimmering with energy.

 

“Whoa!” the second fisherman says aloud, eyeing the sword disdainfully. “Whatever you want, buddy, you don’t need that to get it! We ain’t got much—just about ten or twelve fish total, but…!”

 

“No, you don’t understand…” the figure attempts to explain.

 

He is unable to do so. For, suddenly, a surge of electricity cascades across the water, electrifying everything along the surface of the water. The two fishermen collapse into the water, dead. Fish swimming near the surface float along the surface, also dead. And the figure in the water floats along the surface, unconscious.

 

Waiting on the shore is a figure in a trenchcoat, only his boots showing. The figure in the water—the Fin—floats to his feet, covered with boots with lightning streaks along their sides.

 

He pulls out a small communicator, as he kneels down to ensure that the Fin is alive. “Shocker to base. Mission accomplished,” he says into the communicator. “Bring us in.”

 

END OF INTERLUDE

 

Meanwhile, in the executive boardroom of Oracle, Inc., Jim Hammond is meeting with Challenger, Fiery Mask, Silver Scorpion, Captain Wonder, and Tim—all dressed in civilian attire, albeit civilian attire that one would expect to be worn in the mid-1940’s. As Jim walks in the door and sees his friends there, he nods his head and smiles.

 

“Oh,” he muses, “that strange clothing.”

 

“Am I missing something?” Challenger asks, perplexed that he is getting only half of a story that seems to include him.

 

“Nothing important,” Jim responds. “But, what brings you to Oracle, Inc.?”

 

“We wanted to discuss some important findings with you, Jim,” Captain Wonder says, stepping forward. As he does so, the civilian attire that all of the heroes wears fades away, revealing their costumes.

 

“What?” Jim asks, surprised by the sudden change.

 

“A cloaking device,” Challenger responds nonchalantly. “I was working on it prior to our disappearance, to make covert missions less dangerous for our field operatives in the war. It still requires some work, but it was suitable for our purposes.”

 

“Okay,” Jim replies. He has come to realize that, working with people like Challenger and Mr. Fantastic, their inventions are best taken in stride. Too many questions invite long explanations—and there is always a case of knowing too much.

 

“The women’s clothes sure have changed a lot,” Tim comments, smiling. “Not that I’m complaining.”

 

“Let no one doubt that’s a healthy teenage boy,” Silver Scorpion comments to Fiery Mask, who merely nods, smiling in agreement.

 

“Captain Wonder and I have been working on technology to locate friends from the forties,” Challenger explains.

 

“I can understand that,” Jim nods. “Have you gotten up with Steve—Captain America—yet?”

 

“Not at this point,” Challenger replies. “We have been working out of a bunker of mine in Arizona that we have also been refurbishing into something of a headquarters for us.”

 

“A regular home away from home,” Silver Scorpion chimes in mockingly. After an icy stare from Challenger shot her way, she sits down against the table, and gestures her arms forward, motioning for Challenger to continue unabated.

 

“Getting back to this machinery you were talking about,” Human Torch interjects. “How can you track the heroes from the 40’s?”

 

“It’s simple, really,” Challenger starts to explain. Tim rolls his eyes and shakes his head, regretting that the question was asked, and that he’ll have to sit through another long-winded scientific explanation. He looks at Fiery Mask, who nods in agreement. The two then walk over to a window, where they can look out over the skyline beneath the office. “Before we...disappeared, I was amassing a data base of super-powered heroes from the time.”

 

“I didn’t know such technology existed at the time, to construct a data base like that,” the Human Torch responds.

 

“Oh, the technology we were working with was primitive compared to modern standards, I’m certain,” Captain Wonder replies, nodding his head. “However, I must say that Challenger was years ahead of his time in the miniaturization of computers. Our biggest problem is having to re-adjust to the modern technology and re-learn all those decades of progress.”

 

“All right, you too,” Silver Scorpion interjects. “I’m sure Human Torch doesn’t want to hear about machines in such detail.”

 

“Well, actually,” Human Torch replies with a slight smile, “I’ve been called a ‘machine’ by a few people. I guess I’ve developed a passing interest in the subject.”

 

“Point taken,” Silver Scorpion replies, surprised by his response. She decides to keep quiet for a while.

 

“What I was mainly interested in knowing is,” Human Torch continues,  “how were you able to track such a data base, and how could you identify the people you’re trying to track?”

 

“We track them by their powers,” Challenger responds. “We were putting everyone that we were aware of into the data base, according to their powers.”

 

“Hmm,” Human Torch considers. “That would be a very valuable data base of information.  But there are duplications, not just from that time, but also heroes and villains who have come out since that time who have the same—or similar—powers.”

 

“That is basically true,” Captain Wonder concedes. “That is why we have been factoring out the ones who have appeared in future—or, I suppose it would be modern—times.  In addition, there are also those who have no super-powers, and those we have entered through other methods, such as DNA, when we have that information.” He then looks over at Challenger. “There is still a lot of work that needs to be done.”

 

“I’m certain there is,”  Jim Hammond replies, “and I want you to know that you can certainly use Oracle’s technology and resources for that purpose. That data base sounds invaluable, and I’d like to find any of our old allies that can be found.”

 

“While we appreciate that, and it would be helpful to our research,” Challenger responds. “That’s not why we came.”

 

“Then what is this about?” Jim asks, surprised.

 

“We’ve been monitoring the appearances of our contemporaries,” Captain Wonder explains. “There have been quite a few appearances of them in the recent weeks.”

 

“Well, that’s no big surprise,” Jim replies. “After all, you haven’t been monitoring this for very long, and I’m sure you expected to start finding people.”

 

“That’s not the point,” Challenger responds, shaking his head. “They have all appeared in the same basic geographic area—the Blue Ridge Mountains—and they have all disappeared as soon as they have re-appeared.”

 

 

 

EPILOGUE

 

In a darkened room, the Fiddler, the Black Claw, and the Shocker sit around a table, waiting for the arrival of their ally. He enters, cloaked mainly in the shadows. His angular, solid white eyes can be seen as he enters the room. There is a metallic object attached to his arm, and from it pulsates energy.

 

“My friends,” he remarks, entering the room. “My father has been pleased with our progress thus far, but there is still much more to be done.”

 

“I will take great pleasure in completing the remaining tasks!” the Shocker offers, as electrical energy cascades around his fingertips.

 

“As would I...!” Black Claw offers, his hand reaching out and shattering his glass, which sends shards harmlessly onto his hand and onto the table beneath it.

 

“Our goals are the same,” the Fiddler remarks. “As are our enemies.”

 

“Yes, I am aware of your..enthusiasm, my friends,” the dark figure replies, a sinister smile evident on his face, even through the darkness. “But our operatives are in place, as Dr. Black and my father agreed. All will be ready for our part...soon.”

 

END OF EPILOGUE

 

NEXT ISSUE: THINGS REALLY HEAT UP, AS WE FIND OUT MORE ABOUT THE MISSING HEROES…AND JUST WHAT HUMAN TORCH AND THE BOYS INTEND TO DO ABOUT IT!


RRR FLAMING FIREBALLS RRR

 

Welcome to Human Torch #12. I hope everyone hasn’t forgotten that there is such a title. I’ll have some comments on the Golden Age heroes seen in this issue in a moment, but first I’d like to print the letters  I have for the letter’s page…

 

Jeff,
 
I finished reading Human Torch #11.  I enjoyed it greatly.  It was neat to see a second-generation villain in the piece.  I'm intrigued by what you're doing with the old Timely heroes.  I hope we find out soon what their secret is.
 
Bob Gansler

 

Thanks, Bob. I’m enjoying writing this title. I hope you won’t be disappointed with what I have in store.

 

Jeff,

Human Torch #10 was just what this title needed - a nice, interesting down-time issue to get the ever-expanding cast caught up and firmed up.  Hey, I think I even know the difference between Challenger and Captain Wonder now!


Speaking of which, I'm really starting to like the GA characters.  For the last few issues, I've been so overwhelmed just trying to figure out who they were, that I never got a chance to like them.  This issue brought out their personalities well.


Is the Destroyer that was taken down by the Parrot in the epilogue the GA Destroyer, or Remo Williams?  Since Remo doesn't wear a "costume" (and you stated that the Parrot slashed the guy's costume), I assume it's the former.


Finally, I'm glad to see you acting on the Toro/Frankie Raye connection so quickly... however, I was under the impression (and correct me if I'm wrong, since Frankie's first appearance is one of the Byrne FF issues I'm still missing) that Frankie told the FF Horton was her father, and that she even gained her original flame-based powers by helping him with certain volatile chemicals in his lab.  You've been very good so far at weaving your own continuity (such as the suspended animation of the GA heroes) into the pre-existing stuff (a la the final WWII Cap/Skull fight), but there are all sorts of holes here with Frankie.  Hopefully, you have a plan for addressing them.


All in all, though, this was probably your best OHT issue to date.  IMO, your dialogue and personal interaction are stronger than your action sequences (though there's nothing wrong with those, either).  Keep up the good work, and I'll be waiting for #11.


Russ

 

Thanks, Russ. I appreciate the kind comments, and I’m glad that #10 worked to get you more familiar with the characters. They’ll be appearing more in upcoming issues (including this one), and hopefully you won’t need a scorecard now. J

 

Let’s go down the list and address your questions:

 

And now, as promised, here is the information for the Golden Age characters that appeared in this issue:

 

The Fin (created by Bill Everett) is, in reality, a former United States Navy lieutenant by the name of Peter Noble. In his initial appearance, he was trapped in a sinking submarine, but discovered that he could swim underwater, oblivious to the effects of the extreme depths. He became the ruler or an underwater land named Neptunia. The Fin is super-strong and can breathe underwater or (obviously) on the surface.

 

The Shocker (no relation to the Spider-Man foe of the same name) is a villain with electrical powers. He first appeared, as a Miss America foe, in Miss America #2. We’ll be seeing more on him in future issues.

 

I hope everyone enjoyed this issue. Next issue, the storyline with the second generation heroes continues, with more guest-stars and more answers. Don’t miss it. And, as always, I welcome comments, questions, and suggestions at jx2melton@hotmail.com .

 

Jeff Melton